2-Minute Read for Thursday, 10/29/26
Do you want more people to read your blog? Before you click Publish, ask these 5 questions:
#1 Do I have a catchy title? Would the title attract your attention? Would you want to read more? As I scroll through the Reader List on WordPress, I look at the titles, click on what interests me, and pass over the rest. Don’t you?
#2 Does the first sentence make you want to read more? Sure, you aren’t trying to write a best-selling novel, but that first sentence must grab your reader’s attention and make them want to keep reading.
#3 Can I say it with fewer words? Look for ways to make sentences shorter. First, reduce the number of words and then try to improve the quality of the words that remain. (Cheney, 2005)
#4 Can I turn any nouns into verbs? For example, instead of saying “She made a suggestion”, say “She suggested”. Instead of saying, “He made an offer”, say “He offered”. Sounds easy, but it’s more complicated than you think. This one is the hardest for me to master, and probably the most important.
#5 Did I focus on my message? Or did I ramble on and on about this and that? Make sure every sentence contributes to your message. If not, you’re making your post longer than it needs to be. (Rambling is for journals!)

I don’t claim to be a writing expert, but I have a bookshelf packed with books about writing. Yesterday, I pulled one from the shelf and read the highlighted sections. Because writing is a skill, these tips can make a huge difference in the quality of your writing. Apply the above questions to your post one at a time. Watch how quickly your writing improves!
Whether we’re writing to encourage our brothers and sisters in Christ or to tell others about Jesus, when we improve our writing skills we will attract more people to God’s Truth.
“Whatever you do, work at it with all your heart, as working for the Lord.” Colossians 3:23a NIV
Recommended:
How to Write for a General Audience, Kathleen A. Kendall-Tackett, PhD
In His Love, Cindy
To learn more about Jesus, read Who Is Jesus? A message for the Skeptic
Did you know? The Lord appeared to Abram and said, … “I will establish my covenant as an everlasting covenant between me and you and your descendants after you…” Genesis 17:7 (emphasis mine)
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You write on a subject that is dear to my heart today Cindy – how to write better. Over the years I have been as passionate with the red editing pen as with my fountain pen…yet I still create errors! I have had stages where I have tried to stick with a short devotional format close to that found in mainstream publications, but subjects/messages come along that need more words and attention. I have noticed the value of a catchy title, I have used them in church videos and sermons too, to surprising effect. I have been tempted to try other things over the years but have always come back to the main purpose and format – to share God’s word to encourage others. As time has passed I have found a quiet peace in my service for Him – the results are all up to Him now and in the future.
God bless you richly today in your service for His Kingdom, my friend and sister in Christ, Amen 🙏
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Alan, Relying on God is number one! After you told me about the “Chinese bots” I have never looked at my stats again. I know that was from the Lord.
I am not so polished a writer as you. I think that some of us need to become better writers by studying the craft. But I hope that some day, I too, will find quiet peace in my service for Him. It is true: the results are all up to Him! May God bless you today, as you serve our precious Savior, my friend and brother! 🙏
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Cindy, I agree with you assessment of Alan’s writing, “polished.” 📝😁
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Amen to all four, especially catchy title and fewer words. Nuff said!
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Thanks, Pastor Pete. May the Lord bless you richly as your serve our precious Savior, Jesus Christ! 🙏
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Appreciate these – I love fewer words!
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Yes, there is nothing that will turn the reader off like rambling on and on. 😳
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